来週海外出張があるのでトレーディングは小休止して英語の勉強中。
DAILY NEWS ARTICLEの記事でレッスンを受けた後、10分ほどで出来るだけディクテーションしてみました。
何回も聞き直してるけどそれでも聞き漏らしているところがあるので添削を置いておきます。
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(間違っていたり足りていない単語を太字で添削しています)
The National Aeronoautiscs and Space Administration (NASA) has released its most recent photo of Pluto in mid–June of this year.
Through its New Horizones spacecraft, NASA took athe first close–up inand most detailed photo of Pluto. On July 13th, the New Horizones took a shot of around 4736,000 miles away from the surface. This recent achievement of NASA gives the Unites States grabbing rights that,as it is the only country that is able to explore all the planets in the solar system.
NASA’s photo of Plute has the resolution that is 1000 times better than what any telescope in the world can capture. The heart-shaped region of the dwarf planet can even be seen vividly. This was possible because the spacecraft turned of communications with Earth in order to maxisimize all the data it could get as it passesd through the planet 33,800 miles per hour.
The New Horizenes spacecraft was launched in 2006 to venture toward the edge of the solar system and to further investigate Pluto. By learning more about Pluto , NASA hopes that it will get insights on the process by which planets form.
Another reason recent discovary from NASA’s explaoration is that was the mountains and Kyuiper Belt of the third zone in the Solar System. This region is where Pluto is located, along with 100,000 tynier ice objects. Accouding to mission scientist John Spencer, the mountains in the said region spread as far as 100 a hundred miles and estimated 11,000 feet high. Interestingly these mountains are comparable to the mountain ranges on Earth.
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ありがちな冠詞や前置詞の聞き漏らしや時制の間違いをよくやっちゃってますね。
recentをreasonと間違えるという致命的なミスもやらかしていますが…
こんだけ遅い英語でも聞き取れないというのは、まだまだ修行が足りませんね。
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